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In year 1139 a huge war had started between two planets this war was called the (torent war) started by an mad man name Astroma he wanted to take control of the other planet known as planet Nequa Astroma had all ready took control of planet Azreath this war is an invasion for more lands but the king of planet Nequa known as (Dwayne shamichi) defended his planet with force he and his mens fought against Astroma's mans but they were on the losing side the war seems like it would never end thousands had died and millions are baddly injured. The gods had had enough of the death of inersent people a god known as Kakushiyama the god that mad mankind and mutians. this god was tierd of this war not ending so he created 10 beast that suppose to end the war Astroma had started. But another god known as Arashiyama an god that was secretly created by (Genesis the god that created the universe). Arashiyama took 5 of the 10 beast that Kakushiyama created and turned them evil the 5 evil beast turned against thier creater which made the war even more deadly while the war was going on it awaked another beast beneath the world a beast known as (Therm Yamata the first beast that was created by Kakushiyama long ago) Therm ended the war with his ancient power. The 3 planets was at peace for now and Dwayne had won the war in the end. Therm was about to die so he regurgetated an egg (the egg was said to be the son of Therm Yamata) and the 10 beast turned to their mutian form and mated with the other mutians thats on the 3 planets (legend said that 1 out of the 10 beast sons will become the universe next savior) .... Please excuse my spelling ...lol..Theres alot more to the stroy...please give some good and some bad comments and some things that I could inprove...